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Whatthe_Firetruck

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11. There's all kinds of wrong in this sentence...
Thu Feb 9, 2023, 06:19 PM
Feb 2023

The magnetic field from the MRI scanner pulled the pro-gun lawyer’s weapon was pulled from his waistband and went off, shooting him in the tummy.


Somebody above mentioned it saying tummy instead more serious words like stomach or midriff.

Pulled is used twice when only once should have been done. "the scanner pulled the pro-gun's lawywe weapon from his waistband" or "the pro-gun lawyer's weapon was pulled from his waistband (by the scanner), but this somehow tries to have it both ways.

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