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TexasProgresive

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11. Here's another vote on your dialogue- it is VERY good

Reply to valerief (Reply #6)

Wed Nov 4, 2015, 07:17 AM

Nov 2015

I'm really enjoying your gift to us. I am amazed that you know so much about TV repair in the 60's. You've reminded me of things I have long forgotten, including the tenor of the times. I think that you should charge $8.00 to $10.00 for the download.

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My free (for a few days) Kindle novel on amazon. [View all] valerief Oct 2015 OP

Free fiction-why,valerie, I think this is quite the place TexasProgresive Oct 2015 #1

Thanks. I promise. There won't be a test. Put it down if it bores you. valerief Oct 2015 #4

Very much so the place. Goblinmonger Oct 2015 #2

Thanks! It's my longest novel so far (a consolidation of three novels valerief Oct 2015 #3

So I started today. Goblinmonger Nov 2015 #5

Aren't you sweet to critique it! Thanks so much. I really appreciate the feedback. valerief Nov 2015 #6

Hope it came across well. Goblinmonger Nov 2015 #7

Years ago, I read some Leonard (I'm older than you) but never read his rules for writing. valerief Nov 2015 #8

Awesome Goblinmonger Nov 2015 #9

Thanks. Looks like I must have read these rules from different sources before, valerief Nov 2015 #10

Here's another vote on your dialogue- it is VERY good TexasProgresive Nov 2015 #11

Aren't you nice! Thanks so much. I had to research the TV repair. Ebay and amazon valerief Nov 2015 #12