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Poetry

Waterguy

(278 posts)

1. this is a very strong poem worth reading, it was easy reading this...

Reply to cornball 24 (Original post)

Thu Nov 28, 2024, 12:02 AM

Nov 28

this is really well written
as though two people were having a
natural worthwhile discussion

It's perfect,
not just the grammar
It's the conveyance
the reader doesn't know
a damn thing,
but then they do.

It's really fine writing I think.

Thanks@

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"ME AND I" [View all] cornball 24 Nov 23 OP

this is a very strong poem worth reading, it was easy reading this... Waterguy Nov 28 #1

Thank you so much for your very kind words. I love writing them! cornball 24 Nov 29 #2