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Poetry

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Mon Oct 21, 2019, 07:44 AM

Oct 2019

I think it needs alot more.

I left off the apostrophe, making the Jesus shoes sound like the sandal's nickname.

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If I were your shadow (first draft) [View all] backtoblue Oct 2019 OP

Thanks! backtoblue Oct 2019 #2

Thanks. I hadn't thought of that meaning of Jesus shoes. 3Hotdogs Oct 2019 #3